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I paint pictures with words,
I can twist and bend them until
They fly high like a sky full of birds.

When darkness falls, my words twist.
I can only hope for a reaction
Of emotional mist.

My pencil knows no bounds
No softness, no darkness is discriminated
Against what words, what sounds, what grounds .

Close your eyes and let me sing
A story of pride, lustful sin, and greed.
Offering no gift but words to bring.

Let me write, let me write.
I'll gain the upper hand someday
For my progress knows no might.
I read over my comments recently and felt so inspired by them. This is my way of saying all your feedback really means a lot me! So thank you very much!

So yeah, poem inspired by my fellow author-inspiring, literature-loving deviants! Keep on writing!
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SatsukiNekozawa Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011
inspiring words, bound together magically...composing pure awesomeness ^_^
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thexgoldenxdays Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks o: I do recall that a teacher (I think...) inspired this. o3o I forget who, but someone inspired it xD thank you for reading! : D
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Meli57 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:00000 loved it awesome
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thexgoldenxdays Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
THANKS :hug:
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:iconmeli57:
Meli57 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome :)
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unconventionalhill Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
;w; <3
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thexgoldenxdays Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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dolphinesrock Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really good and cool!
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thexgoldenxdays Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks : D I'm really glad you think so!
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dolphinesrock Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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